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My seven sins…

Birth was my first sin
             …
I had a lust to live
             …
Life was my second sin
             …
Hubris was my desire
Believing I was worth more
than nothing ever was
            …
Love was my third sin
            …
Envy it was indeed
jealous of those who felt it
           …
Need was my fourth sin
           …
from the birth of greed I needed things to live

Gluttony become my fifth sin
           …
As I tried to live to not die I tried to eat to survive

Rebellion was my sixth sin
          …
Wrath was what they saw as I break the rules for what I believed in
My last sin was sloth
         …
I was too lazy to stay alive
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fairytales-pic Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
It was nice! when did you wright it?
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haakon95 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
i wrote it yesturday in the midle of the night
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fairytales-pic Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
niice ^^
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haakon95 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
thank u so much ^^'
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AnimeMangaArt19 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice! I really like it, you should do more! :)
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haakon95 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
Thank you so muc, yes i will write much more whenever i feel i need it ^^
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Scaretted Featured By Owner May 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I find this pretty unique
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haakon95 Featured By Owner May 6, 2013
thank u, hmm in this world that would be a sin as well sense they throwing stick and stones on us...the poeple who are not like others...
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Scaretted Featured By Owner May 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
people who is not like others tend to reject them because they don't understand them (wether they try or not)
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haakon95 Featured By Owner May 7, 2013
true oh so true
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